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I am your faithful companion.
I am your loyal slave.
I can cause great distruction.
I can even destroy the brave.

I rip through flesh.
I sevre your limbs.
I cut through metal mesh.
I hack through you and your kin.

To some I am merely a tool.
To some I am but metal and wood.
To you they are only a fool.
To you they are the opposite of good.
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This poem is about vikings and the respect they had for there weapons and armour, I wish people today had the same respect that they did back then.
Hope you like it, if anyone reads it.
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!VolfnessWhiter Aug 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
"I can cause great distruction." -- Shouldn't it be 'destruction'?

'I sevre your limbs.' -- and 'sever'?
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~Questingpoet Aug 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I like it. Read my Haiku called "Icingdeath", it's about a sword too! Respect and honor are in short supply now my fellow poet. We write of dying things...
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:icondeimos-the-god:
thanks for the appreciation
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Mood: Joy ~Woad-Warrior Aug 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice.
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:icondeimos-the-god:
thank you very much
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Mood: Speechless =sammipa Aug 5, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I love it
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:icondeimos-the-god:
you and one other person X(
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Mood: Cheerful ~Sevenway7 Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
i liked it if blades could talk i bet thats what they would say lol good job
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:icondeimos-the-god:
I kow my knives would have a go at me for using them too much
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